For Sophie


I wanted this to be a sonnet, because it’s a structure that suits a reflective, contemplative subject.  However, sonnets (I’ve come to believe) can’t carry more than two or three ideas, especially if those ideas are to be expressed elegantly. As others have said, a sonnet is a coin with two sides. Try as I might, I could not fit what I wanted to say to ‘Sophie’ into the standard fourteen lines.  So I gave it the stretch limo treatment:  A Petrarchan sonnet, but with an extra quatrain stuffed into the middle.  A cheat, but I can’t see that it does any harm.

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